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Hogwarts Too Exposed Chapter 14 part 2

szaleniec1000 Sep 05, 2012 11:08

Welcome back. And happy birthday to ghoststory93!
( HTE Chapter 14 )

balance of stupidity, show don't tell, expospeak, luna is ooc, my argument is pastede on yay, pov!fail, reading the books is a good idea, welsh railway, priorities be damned, americanisms in the potterverse, tractum ex culo, madam malkin's mugglewear, ineffectual villainy, epic fail, soapbox, and then i threw it against the wall, a description would be nice, blinks of madness, department of redundancy department, i can has characterisation, read pou instead, sexism, pointless wittering, pop goes the house-elf, nudity for everyone, disembodied dialogue, harry potter, badfic:hogwarts too exposed, frost resistance, snape is ooc, it's full of filler, approved hogwarts exposed dialogue voice

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Deserving Chapter 50

szaleniec1000 Mar 20, 2011 14:48

It's a funny thing, isn't it? I have a few vague ideas of where I want to take these sporkings, just how to follow something like this... and then before I can decide, guess what appears. I CAN'T ESCAPE THIS FIC. Happy half-century, everyone.

( Deserving Chapter 50 )

please recycle where facilities exist, please form an orderly queue, wrong word dammit, blinks of madness, department of redundancy department, symbolism fail, badfic:deserving, i hate that you have a cock, pov!fail, centaur of gor, mary sue and gary stu, villain decay, credit where it's due, single is a douche, kingsley is ooc, the mysterious second author, you fail paediatrics forever, harry potter, convention of the psychics, dada, continuity isn't optional

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